User talk:Rrosa3005/sandbox

Peer-Review Comments

Hi ladies,

Your article looks like it's off to a great start! Ymauricia (talk) 19:51, 11 May 2012 (UTC)

Has been merged

Note that the content from this article appears to already have been merged into the article Criteria air contaminants by the original authors. Dcoetzee 13:24, 12 May 2012 (UTC)

Peer Review

Hey ladies,

This page is looking really good. Interesting and important stuff. I looked at the merged page and would suggest maybe breaking down the sections further and separating each criteria pollutant into it's own category - so it is individually marked in the table of contents. I think that would help with easy flow of the content. I'll keep looking and edit anything that stands out!

Chasercm (talk) 19:19, 15 May 2012 (UTC)