User talk:Ronald McDonald is back

October 2015

A page you created has been nominated for deletion as an attack page, according to section G10 of the criteria for speedy deletion.

Do not create pages that attack, threaten, or disparage their subject. Attack pages and files are not tolerated by Wikipedia, and users who create or add such material may be blocked from editing. GILO A&E⇑ 09:05, 19 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

This is your only warning; if you vandalize Wikipedia again, as you did at Chicken McNuggets, you may be blocked from editing without further notice. GILO A&E⇑ 09:06, 19 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

You may be blocked from editing without further warning the next time you vandalize Wikipedia, as you did at Pork McNuggets. Velella ^{Velella Talk} 09:13, 19 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

You have been blocked indefinitely from editing because your account is being used only for vandalism. If you think there are good reasons why you should be unblocked, you may appeal this block by first reading the guide to appealing blocks, then adding the following text below this notice: {{unblock|reason=Your reason here ~~~~}}. Sarahj2107 (talk) 09:24, 19 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

This user's unblock request has been reviewed by an administrator, who declined the request. Other administrators may also review this block, but should not override the decision without good reason (see the blocking policy).

Ronald McDonald is back (block log • active blocks • global blocks • contribs • deleted contribs • filter log • creation log • change block settings • unblock • checkuser (log))

Request reason:

OK, it's now been over six months. Per Standard Offer, I wish to be unblocked as I have done stupid things on Wikipedia. I hope to become a constructive editor and I want a second chance please. Thanks for reading my appeal, and I apologize for my actions towards the encyclopedia. Ronald McDonald is back (talk) 06:57, 31 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Decline reason:

This unblock request has been declined due to your history of vandalism and/or disruption to this encyclopedia. However, we are willing to give you another chance provided that you can earn back the trust of the Wikipedia community. To be unblocked you need to demonstrate that you are willing and able to contribute positively to Wikipedia. You can do this by:

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Edits - IB Group 1 subjects

External assessment

Paper 1: Guided literary analysis (SL: 1 hour 30 minutes)/Literary commentary (HL: 2 hours) (20 marks weighing 20% of the course) - Candidates write a commentary on one of the two unseen passages - a prose and a poetry. SL candidates must respond to the two guiding questions given in the question paper - one on understanding and interpretation and another on style. HL candidates are assessed for their exploration of the various literary aspects and how their effects are achieved. SL students are not required to have a persuasive commentary or a personal response, rather only a guided commentary is required. SL students also only have 1h30m to complete their analysis as they are given two guiding questions. ^[1]
Paper 2: Essay (25 marks weighing 25% of the course, 1 hour and 30 minutes for SL, 2 hours for HL) - Candidates write a comparative essay based on one of the three essay questions given for the literary genre studied in part 3 of the course. Responses must be based on at least two works from this part, but reference can be made from one of the works studied in part 2 as well. Candidates will not have access to the works studied. The genres are poetry, drama, novels, short stories and non-fiction prose. ^[2]
Written assignment (25 marks weighing 25% of the course) - Candidates submit a 1200 to 1500-word analytical literary essay on a topic generated by the candidate, based on a work studied in part 1. This is done in 4 stages - the interactive oral (journal writing for self-taught candidates), the reflective statement, topic development and the production of the essay. The journal writing (for self-taught candidates) and reflective statement, of 300-400 words, is also submitted for assessment.

Paper 1 accounts for 20% of the course, Paper 2 and the written assignment account for 25% each, hence external assessment gives 70% of the grade. ^[3]

References

Unblock 2

This user's unblock request has been reviewed by an administrator, who declined the request. Other administrators may also review this block, but should not override the decision without good reason (see the blocking policy).

Ronald McDonald is back (block log • active blocks • global blocks • contribs • deleted contribs • filter log • creation log • change block settings • unblock • checkuser (log))

Request reason:

OK, I have completed the edits. Please unblock my account. I have demonstrated my willingness to comply with Wikipedia guidelines. My edits are substantial and have added references and relevant info. Ronald McDonald is back (talk) 03:03, 7 June 2016 (UTC)

Decline reason:

Your edits are here. I mean this politely, that's a long way from a substantial edit. That paragraph used to be 11 words and is now 26 words. You added a single reference to a primary source (i.e. not an ideal citation). It's a good start but not sufficient. Additionally, you didn't follow the instructions, and thereby committed a copyright violation. Now, I don't want you to get discouraged. I'm not saying 'no', I'm saying 'not yet'. You are very welcome to try again and nobody will hold this particular unblock request against you. Finally, my apologies for the delay in getting back to you. I was out of town on work so this took much longer than you had the right to expect. Yamla (talk) 23:12, 12 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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Yamla, I believe you are being pinged. I'm not sure about the conditions you met, but a claim is made of having met those conditions. Thank you, Drmies (talk) 03:06, 7 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

How long will this take? Ronald McDonald is back (talk) 03:07, 7 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

As long as it takes. SQL ^{Query me!} 04:44, 7 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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