User talk:Rodeh777/sandbox

Edit for article draft: - For the 3rd sentence, I would say cognitively impaired rather than mentally impaired. - For the 4th sentence, I would put a period behind "best understood by the patient." I would then start the next sentence with "Because of this." Otherwise, it is a run-on sentence. - "Due to verbal skills mostly deficient in this population," was slightly confusing to read. I would re-word. Could possibly write, "Due to diminished verbal skills in this population." Also, don't forget a comma after population. - For the 1st sentence in the second paragraph, you accidentally wrote "numbers" instead of "number." - For the 2nd sentence in the second paragraph, don't forget a comma after "pain." - Very well written, and very interesting topic. I liked how you first introduced the topic, and the problem of inadequate pain monitoring and relief with dementia patients. Then, you gave a suggestion to help increase pain recognition in these patients. Howerzym (talk) 02:41, 17 November 2017 (UTC)