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Welcome!

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Hello, Robinvanpersie207, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:56, 1 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Removed contributions from Food system

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Hi! You added a lot of content to the food system article without sufficient citations. Moreover, the section on technology that you added isn't encyclopedic in style or appropriate WP:Weight for the article. Sadads (talk) 23:18, 18 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Again, you're adding a lot of material without proper citations. In addition, the tone is more of a personal lecture than a fact-based encyclopedia article. I'm going to remove it and suggest you do a complete rewrite that includes sources for your claims and less personal opinion. 2601:647:4980:4C40:6179:72EB:D17A:EE34 (talk) 02:17, 30 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]