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Hello, Rluna2020, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

I hope you enjoy editing here. If you haven't already done so, please check out the student training library, which introduces you to editing and Wikipedia's core principles. You may also want to check out the Teahouse, a community of Wikipedia editors dedicated to helping new users. Below are some resources to help you get started editing.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:47, 4 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Welcome

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Welcome to Wikipedia and Wikiproject Medicine

Welcome to Wikipedia! We have compiled some guidance for new healthcare editors:

  1. Please keep the mission of Wikipedia in mind. We provide the public with accepted knowledge, working in a community.
  2. We do that by finding high quality secondary sources and summarizing what they say, giving WP:WEIGHT as they do. Please do not try to build content by synthesizing content based on primary sources.
  3. Please use high-quality, recent, secondary sources for medical content (see WP:MEDRS; for the difference between primary and secondary sources, see the WP:MEDDEF section.) High-quality sources include review articles (which are not the same as peer-reviewed), position statements from nationally and internationally recognized bodies (like CDC, WHO, FDA), and major medical textbooks. Lower-quality sources are typically removed. Please beware of predatory publishers – check the publishers of articles (especially open source articles) at Beall's list.
  4. The ordering of sections typically follows the instructions at WP:MEDMOS. The section above the table of contents is called the WP:LEAD. It summarizes the body. Do not add anything to the lead that is not in the body. Style is covered in MEDMOS as well; we avoid the word "patient" for example.
  5. We don't use terms like "currently", "recently," "now", or "today". See WP:RELTIME.
  6. More generally see WP:MEDHOW, which gives great tips for editing about health -- for example, it provides a way to format citations quickly and easily
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    • Be sure to cite the PMID for journal articles and ISBN for books
    • Please include page numbers when referencing a book or long journal article, and please format citations consistently within an article.
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Once again, welcome, and thank you for joining us! Please share these guidelines with other new editors.

– the WikiProject Medicine team Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 02:13, 12 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hi DocJames, Thank you for providing the new editor guidelines above. I have reviewed them and will share with my WikiMed class group. Rluna2020 (talk) 19:09, 23 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Reply

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Hi. According to your course's timeline on the Dashboard, you shouldn't be at the stage of needing feedback yet. After you receive feedback from your classmates and respond to their reviews, let me know and I may be able to provide some additional feedback. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:53, 12 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Oh, I see that you moved your work into the article already, without waiting for feedback. The edit summaries that Doc James left should be helpful. Please pay attention to what he did there. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:55, 12 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Ian. Thank you for your reply. You are correct- I wasn't at the stage of receiving peer feedback at that point. I was learning how to make new edits and my colleagues encouraged me to make small changes at a time. I reviewed DocJames's edits and that was helpful. Rluna2020 (talk) 19:16, 23 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Please read

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The advise provided to you above in full. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 22:05, 16 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

User:Ian (Wiki Ed) can you follow up and get them to read WP:MEDRS and WP:MEDMOS? Thanks Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 21:18, 17 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Doc James: Yes. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:41, 18 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, I read your message and have reviewed WP:MEDRS and WP:MEDMOS. Thank you for sharing. Rluna2020 (talk) 19:36, 23 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Ref does not say this

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"*Antidepressants such as fluoxetine and sertraline may indirectly help to improve RRBs when they are exacerbated by anxiety, but currently there is no strong evidence that they directly reduce these behaviors. [1]"

Conclusion is "There is no evidence of effect of SSRIs in children and emerging evidence of harm. There is limited evidence of the effectiveness of SSRIs in adults from small studies in which risk of bias is unclear." Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 21:05, 17 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Plus you are adding a bunch of primary sources and Uptodate is not very good as a source as you cannot reference a specific version of it. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 21:10, 17 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hi DocJames. Thank you for your feedback. I realize that I entered the wrong reference for the statement made above, and I'm reviewing my Zotero library to find the correct one. Thank you for deleting this change. As you suggested, I will use other primary sources that are more reliable and current than UptoDate. Please let me know if you have any other suggestions.Rluna2020 (talk) 19:22, 23 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

  1. ^ Williams, Katrina; Brignell, Amanda; Randall, Melinda; Silove, Natalie; Hazell, Philip (2013-08-20). Cochrane Developmental, Psychosocial and Learning Problems Group (ed.). "Selective serotonin reuptake inhibitors (SSRIs) for autism spectrum disorders (ASD)". Cochrane Database of Systematic Reviews. doi:10.1002/14651858.CD004677.pub3.
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