User talk:Rlgmj2018

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Hello, Rlgmj2018, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:30, 15 October 2018 (UTC)

Notes

Hi! You can import content from your sandbox by following the directions here. However one note, I would like for you to see if you can find more sourcing for her. You rely very heavily on Goldenberg's CV. This is OK, however you should also be using other sourcing as well to help back up claims since it's not really a good idea to rely so heavily on a single source. It's also not a good idea to only or predominantly use primary sources like a CV (ie, things put out by Goldenberg, her colleagues, or the places she's attended or worked for) for an article because these cannot establish notability - you need independent and reliable sources like reviews and commentary on her and her work to establish this. I've added some reviews to her article so this should help on that end, but this could definitely use more, especially when it comes to her biographical details. You could work on this after you move it live, just as long as this gets added. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 01:29, 1 December 2018 (UTC)

Edits

Hey, so I saw the following: "During her graduate work, she switched from Classicist to religious studies.In order to study how images,symbols and myths take a place on meaning in both a personal and cultural context" - Should be one sentence

"In an interview with Peggy Schmeiser, Goldenberg states that her interest for mythology started when she took a course at Princeton about the god Dionysus and she wanted to know more about what mythology meant for people and how it influences them. Which is why she states she sought out a Religious Studies department at Yale University." - Should be one sentence

The rest seems good!

Stef — Preceding unsigned comment added by Musceleanu (talk • contribs) 13:52, 10 December 2018 (UTC)