User talk:Rlevan3/Digital audio
Peer review response
[edit]"If he was able to add more photos. As stated above, it would really tie everything together and add the final additions to the already great edits." - I am planning on adding maybe one or two photos, but i am more focused on edits.
"Beyond that small section though I don’t see much of what you have done minus very minor edits. You should focus your time on adding more substantive contributions and improving the clarity of the writing. You also need to be sure to explain your edits when you publish them, as the last few do not have any explanation." - I understand, I would like to add more contributions instead of edits. I will work on making better publish explanations.
"You have one peer reviewed academic source that you cite, but you need a bare minimum of four to complete the research expectations of this assignment"- Yes, I need to add contributions that reflect my sources. I still need to find another source for my contributions.
"I’m not clear why you turned the interfaces section into a paragraph instead of a list. It makes it harder to read and turns it into a run on but incomplete sentence." - I agree with this, I only made this edit because wikipedia suggested I change it which didn't make sense to me, but I thought if wiki was suggesting it then it must be a good idea. I was wrong.
"You need to focus on adding more content from peer-reviewed academic sources to complete the minimum expectations for this assignment. This is at it’s core a research assignment and you have not yet fulfilled that requirement." - I agree, I am going to focus on research from this point in my edits. Rlevan3 (talk) 15:03, 14 November 2022 (UTC)