User talk:Rikooka/Kusa mochi

Feedback on your article

@Rikooka: Your article is great! You've really done a fantastic job of expanding the article, adding references and so on. This is very much improved!

My only big feedback is that the detailed instructions on how to make it are not really normal in an encyclopedia article. I would cut this material out before you move it.

Don't throw it away. You should instead move it over to wikibooks:Cookbook:Kusa mochi (there is a "create" link at the top of that page). You can model the page off the content over on wikibooks:Cookbook:Daifuku. This is a different website, connected to Wikipedia and by the same organization, but that contains a cookbook with recipes. I think this would be great!

Other than that, you should take a look at this list of suggestions for polishing your article which is a helpful set of ideas from altsalt. Many won't apply but some might. I've gone through and made a few edits to your articles to clean things up—mostly tiny stylistic things but there are more like that. Look at the history to see what I've done before you move it over.

Do a final pass and try to address any of the things on the list on our website that you think are useful and would improve things. Then go ahead and make it (minus the recipe) live on Wikipedia. And move the rest to Wikibooks! —mako๛ 03:17, 14 February 2020 (UTC)