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17:31, 9 March 2016 (UTC)

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Hello, Tripp193, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:43, 9 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Feedback request

Hi Tripp193. I saw your request for feedback. Is there something I can help you with? Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:20, 6 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Based on your article draft I am guessing that you intend to expand the Forced circulation boiler article. One thing to bear in mind as you work is that you should have a lead section that starts by stating as succinctly as possible (1-2 sentences) what a forced circulation boiler is, and then goes on to summarize the entire article in 1-2 paragraphs. Beyond that, I would suggesting moving the "types" section above the advantages and disadvantages. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:41, 11 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]