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Your submission at Articles for creation: Daira (June 18)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Jamiebuba was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of music-related topics). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

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Jamiebuba (talk) 08:32, 18 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Redrum211196! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Jamiebuba (talk) 08:32, 18 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, @Jamiebuba, thank you so much for your swift review! However, I am a little confused about this statement, "they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject" as the citations include some bigger, reliable media houses (re: Time of India, Rolling Stones India) as sources. While I'm aware that the other sources are on a smaller scale (re: Indulge Express, Ticket Fairy), but they are established media houses that have independently published articles; not simply passing mentions but detailed articles about the subject and their work. Could you help me understand this situation better? I am new to Wikipedia, and this has been a fun process, I would love to know how to improve my articles if you can help! Thanks! Redrum211196 (talk) 08:53, 19 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Daira (June 24)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Ratnahastin was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Daira and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Ratnahastin (talk) 10:42, 24 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]