User talk:RedPenguin2

CamTran

I notice that you reverted my edits on the above article. I should point out that the article still reads like an advert for CamTram and also reads as if it is taken from promotional material for the company. Especially with words like "you". In addition there is no need to bold the article name more than once in the article. And to make a word into bold you need only to add 3x ' either side of the word and not 5x '. I have again removed the phone numbers as they serve no purpose on an encyclopedia and again make it more like an advert, I have though left in some of the content which you simply added back in that I had previosuly removed. However, I have amended it to read "customer" and not "you". I have also added heading where they should be. Please do not simply revert my edit again without discussion. If you disagree with the edit then mention it on the articles talk page. Thanks.♦Tangerines♦·Talk 03:03, 30 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Ah hah! No worries, hopefully then it will get the article cleaned up in the end! I have though amended the refs you added into the correct format. What I would suggest though is if there are any third party sources that mention CamTran *such as a local newspaper online) then any online articles from them could be added as a source. It is just that at the moment now there is just the one source which is from the topic of the article itself! Have fun editing and if I can be of help let me know.♦Tangerines♦·Talk 03:13, 30 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

No you can't add yourself as a source LOL! As I said local newspaper articles would help. To sign posts on talk pages all you need do is simply add 4x tildes (four of these ~} after your message and your name will appear with a link to your talk page and a datestamp. Have fun! ♦Tangerines♦·Talk 03:17, 30 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

It is just that mentioning the frequencies didn't seem relevant? More info about the copamies history would help, also as you use the service every day even pictures.♦Tangerines♦·Talk 03:26, 30 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

With the fleet, to be honest I would leave it in at least for now. Perhaps concentrating on finding some online sources though that mention CamTran?♦Tangerines♦·Talk 03:39, 30 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

No you can't use the images from their website. However if there is an article about CamTram selling off old fleet then you could add that. I know it might not seem much but it is info and sourced (if the article is online) There is a "news article" refs template that you can use for that.♦Tangerines♦·Talk 03:39, 30 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]