User talk:Rahultiwari cs

Your submission at Articles for creation: Mandal bhilwara (February 9)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by MatthewVanitas was:

The way this is written is very confusing. Please look at an article like Jaipur to see how a town/city should be explained.

Next, you have no WP:Sourcing whatsoever. For a given fact, you should have a clear source. See WP:Referencing for beginners.

Also, we don't need things like measurements to nearby villages; a reader can simply look at a map to see what's nearby. If you can program in the WP:Coordinates for the town, Wikipedia can automatically display a map.

Please do the needful and apply sourcing. I will tidy up the format and remove unneeded bits for you.

You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to User:Rahultiwari cs/Mandal bhilwara and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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MatthewVanitas (talk) 22:37, 9 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Rahultiwari cs, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering or curious about why your article submission was declined please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! MatthewVanitas (talk) 22:37, 9 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Mandal (Bhilwara)

Hello, Rahultiwari cs. It has been over six months since you last edited your WP:AFC draft article submission, entitled "Mandal".

The page will shortly be deleted. If you plan on editing the page to address the issues raised when it was declined and resubmit it, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}} or {{db-g13}} code. Please note that Articles for Creation is not for indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you want to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at WP:REFUND/G13. An administrator will in most cases undelete the submission.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. (t) Josve05a (c) 23:19, 3 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]