User talk:Rachelhannahlee/sandbox

Le Zhou's Peer Review

The notes at the beginning of the article stated that the tone or style of the article may not reflect the encyclopedic tone. I think sustainability accounting is a very professional term in financial area, so the persona of this article should be more academic and straight. Also for terms in financial area, it is necessary to use some data and statistics to reinforce explanations for the subject.

Sections you plan to add for the article are very essential, I believe. Companies will need to know methodology to measure the outcome of sustainability accounting and what benefits they will obtain from it. Also motivations to carry out sustainability accounting are also an important part to understand why sustainability accounting can be adopted. But I am curious whether you will create a new section for the method they use to measure the suitability efforts, or add those contents as part of the existing Methodology section.Lezhou1 (talk) 04:25, 3 March 2018 (UTC)