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Assignment #5 - Flow Battery

I thought your changes were great. The rewording of their chem babble was easy to understand and I like how you linked it to the electrochemical cell, the only things I caught were:

In your insert for "electroactive species" you have an opening bracket but not a closing one.
Also you added the word "the" "...which the electrolyte containing one or more dissolved electroactive species..." I personally think it would be easier to read using  "a" but that may just be me.

Hope this helps, and good job.