User talk:Qiziyang

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:22, 11 June 2019 (UTC)

Physics education

Hello. I wanted to explain that I reverted this edit to physics education because it does not seem like an improvement to the article. Briefly,:

• You seem to be writing about specific courses and mention a professor at Yale, not the general subject of physics education.
• The WP:TONE and choice of words is unusual (e.g. "wild", "shallow").
• There are issues with capitalization, punctuation, grammar, missing and extra words, singular/plural confusion, incomplete sentences, etc.
• External links are generally inappropriate in the body of an article.
• References should not be preceded by a space.

—[AlanM1(talk)]— 01:23, 3 July 2019 (UTC)

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