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[edit]{{helpme}} I apologize for not signing my posts. How does the Ganeden Biotech page look now? Does is still read as an advertisement? --Probiotictracker (talk) 18:37, 21 May 2009 (UTC)
- Hi there. I have moved your help request down here, and put it into a section. It is easier to follow things if you make a new section at the end of your talk page for each new conversation.
- I will look at the article now, and reply here soon. Cheers, Chzz ► 18:58, 21 May 2009 (UTC)
- Reference: Mikhail Gershenzon
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[[Mikhail Gershenzon]]
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- I looked at the article, and I think that there are still some problems that need to be addressed.
- The main issue is that not all of the facts are supported by references to reliable sources. For example, how can I, as a reader, verify that it is the largest seller of over-the-counter probiotics in the United States, it was founded in 1997, that the CSO identified a delivery system for lactic acid producing bacteria, etc etc.
- So - it isn't written like an advertisement any more, and I will remove that tag, but I will add another saying that the references need improving.
- For more help, you can either;
- Leave a message on my own talk page;
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- Use a {{helpme}} - please create a new section at the end of your own talk page, put {{helpme}}, and ask your question - remember to 'sign' your name by putting ~~~~ at the end;
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- Talk to us live.
- Leave a message on my own talk page;
- Best wishes, Chzz ► 19:08, 21 May 2009 (UTC)
{{helpme}} Thanks so much for your help and input. I really appreciate it.Probiotictracker (talk) 20:07, 21 May 2009 (UTC)
- You're welcome. Use the methods above if you need more. Chzz ► 20:09, 21 May 2009 (UTC)