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Your submission at Articles for creation: Judah Mahay (August 6)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Bsoyka was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Bsoyka (t • c • g) 17:11, 6 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you so much! This was incredibly helpful. I've always wanted to be part of the Wikipedia community. I've revised the article significantly, removing any peacock terms, changed the tone to be more encyclopedic, and I delete content that didn't fit that format. I hope this helps. Thank you again. Poeticdiligence (talk) 17:42, 6 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Poeticdiligence! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Bsoyka (t • c • g) 17:11, 6 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Judah Mahay (October 8)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by AlphaBetaGamma was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Footnote 2 is a red flag for me, this is primary source and not secondary.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Judah Mahay and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

ABG (Talk/Report any mistakes here) 23:58, 8 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]