User talk:Petitee
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Article chosen: Polycystic ovary syndrome
Initial anayisis of the article: I like the way it is explained to the population, because it's a very popular condition between females. The article is good and has a lot of information in some aspects, but others are being left with so little explanation that I really want to improve. The images presented are not well understood.
Overall organization: What will you add? More information in the diagnosis and better images.
What will you remove? The image, and the introduction lenght.
What will you decrease coverage of? The introduction is too big, that information should be divided into the aspects below.
What will you augment? History, diagnosis
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