User talk:Perryfeng2626

nice work about the wikipedia review

Your submission at Articles for creation: The New Era of E-commerce (February 27)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by BuySomeApples was:

This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.

The comment the reviewer left was:

This is an interesting subject but this reads more like an essay or a thinkpiece. To be published, it would have to be more like an encyclopedia entry. However, there's already an article on E-commerce. I recommend using some of the material here to improve that page instead.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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BuySomeApples (talk) 01:24, 27 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Perryfeng2626! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! BuySomeApples (talk) 01:24, 27 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:The New Era of E-commerce

Hello, Perryfeng2626. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "The New Era of E-commerce".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 22:57, 24 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]