User talk:Pennylikeacoin/sandbox
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Watch for spelling/grammatical errors, as well as the tone of the article. I noticed a few words that had letters missing. In a couple areas it seemed a bit opinionated (which is totally understandable because this band is amazing), but just make sure that you keep things sounding more factual. Otherwise, it was good and provided quality information! Alexinetice (talk) 23:07, 13 October 2016 (UTC)
Thank you so much for fixing my spelling and grammar errors! I just went back and tried to make sure my article sounded as objective as possible. It is hard when you love a band so much not to get opinionated! Thanks again! Pennylikeacoin (talk) 04:27, 21 October 2016 (UTC)