User talk:Penguin60561

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Hinsdale South High School The lead section is understandable, but does not have a clear meaning across it. It seems choppy. There is not a good balance in the piece. I do not see any bias in the piece, so the coverage is good. There are reliable sources in the article. The article needs more substance and more information about the topic. History The article was started September 11, 2005 at 05:19. The article was bare in its early stages. 351 users edited this article. The last time it was edited was one day ago. There are 48.94 edits on this article per year. Talk There are only two things on the talk page. One is for using the image from the Hinsdale South site and the other is reverting edits NPOV. Edits I added a few words to make a sentence flow better and I spell checked a word.

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