User talk:Pawilsong

This user is a student editor in Brooklyn_College,_CUNY/THEA_7216X_-_Global_Theater_History_and_Theory_III_(Spring_2019) .

This user is a student editor in Brooklyn_College,_CUNY/THEA_7214X_-_Global_Theater_History_and_Theory_I_(Fall_2018) .

Hello!

Hi Praycious, this is Adrian from our Global Theatre History class. I'm just stopping by to say hello! --Asbenn (talk) 13:31, 5 September 2018 (UTC)Asbenn[reply]

Hey hey

It's Toby, saying hello! --Tobymsinger (talk) 14:54, 5 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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16:04, 5 September 2018 (UTC)

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Peer Review

Hey! Great article so far. I just have one grammar note before moving on. I wonder if it's worth it in the beginning of the article to say "in the specific, or, more common sense..." to really capture how people use Egungun because the phrasing was just a little unclear for me for a moment. In all, everything in the relevant is important to the topic. There wasn't anything distracting, though I wonder how the article might read if the first paragraph of the "Classification of Egungun types" can be it's own section. The second and third paragraphs seem like it's discussing a different aspect than types.

The article is neutral, and there are no bias toward anything. The citations are good, and are reliable. I don't notice anything that should be added. Great start!

Asbenn (talk) 15:36, 13 November 2018 (UTC)Asbenn[reply]

In The Wine Time by Ed Bullins moved to draftspace

An article you recently created, In The Wine Time by Ed Bullins, does not have enough sources and citations as written to remain published. It needs to have sections on the reception and production of the play, not just a description of the plot. Furthermore, the plot section needs to be condensed--see NOT PLOT for an explanation. . I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of "Draft:" before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article is ready for mainspace, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. DGG ( talk ) 05:19, 5 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: In The Wine Time by Ed Bullins (September 8)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Bearcat was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject. Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Blogs and its presence in WorldCat are not reliable or notability-supporting sources for a theatrical play. The New York Times piece is definitely a step in the right direction, but not enough all by itself if all the rest of the sources are bad ones; we need more like that and less like the blogs.

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Bearcat (talk) 01:47, 8 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:In The Wine Time by Ed Bullins concern

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Concern regarding Draft:In The Wine Time

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 21:03, 24 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]