User talk:Parkdj
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[edit]Hello, Parkdj, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:26, 2 October 2018 (UTC)
Peer Review
[edit]I think Fujifilm, Lomography, Polaroid Orginal, and Mint Camera subsection all have room to be improved. If you want to make a timeline, it may be best to link a new page or current page but I dont know? Adding a pop-culture section may also be good route to take if you are looking for a more specific edits to make.
The instant camera page also needs sources pretty bad in all sections. Or maybe just better in-text citations.
Otherwise, if I could give some advice it would be to find a specific part of instant camera page to work on because it is so broad and it might be hard to get stuff done when there isnt a specific region to focus on (but I dont know).
Sikkemjs (talk) 17:21, 29 October 2018 (UTC)
Peer Review Reply
[edit]Thanks!, I think that is a great suggestion. I think I will focus more on parts of the over all page rather than trying to solve all of the page since it will take more time than this assignment to do. I think I will stick with Pop culture Idea and also add a section about the different film you need for these camera's because they are a very important part of the Instant Camera Parkdj (talk) 15:26, 31 October 2018 (UTC)