User talk:Paola0329

Morphology

1. Consider rephrasing: "The normal morphology consists of dark coloured largely unbranched chains of conidia (usually 5-10 conidia in length), which coloration due to the presence of the dark pigment melanin" 2. Spelling error: condiophores 3. Is any research available on the specific environmental factors in vivo that cause differential growth?

Aksharakd92 (talk) 15:27, 6 November 2013 (UTC)Aksharakd92Aksharakd92 (talk) 15:27, 6 November 2013 (UTC)

Epidemiology

1. Formatting error: cause a cerebral [phaeohyphomycosis] affecting 2. Grammar (in need of appropriate punctuation): C. bantiana phaeohyphomycosis however combination of amphotericin B...

Aksharakd92 (talk) 15:27, 6 November 2013 (UTC)Aksharakd92Aksharakd92 (talk) 15:27, 6 November 2013 (UTC)

Peer Review

Hi, good article so far. Adding sections such as ecology and epidemiology might be useful. In morphology section, I don't think you need to repeat the name of fungi in every sentence. It makes it a bit distracting and hard to follow. Was there any in-vitro studies done on animal models? is there any mode of infection in animals too? maybe you could add a section on that. A couple of your sentences need punctuation editing. For e.g. for the very last sentence, you can put a full stop before "however". Other than these, I think your article looks quite interesting. Hope this helps. Good luck! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Naz7 (talk • contribs) 14:18, 13 November 2013 (UTC)