User talk:P Bobodyne/sandbox
P-Money, I think this is a really good start to your article. The sections on reproduction and human uses could be expanded. Taking information from the general cuttlefish and putting it in here will augment this page. The "see also" section should probably have hyperlinks. A few more citations couldn't hurt in the coloration section. Overall, it's on a good foot to be amazing. Truffula Tree (talk) 18:43, 25 March 2016 (UTC)
Hi Peter!
I think expanding the sections further where you can will really round the article out. For example, the human section and the reproduction section could possibly have more information. The additional links at the bottom are cool too. When discussing coloring, it might be useful to discuss how they change color. Perhaps a behavior section would also be useful. Overall, the splitting of the ecology section was a great call, if you can, try and expand the new sections for more information.
MarineBiologistLaura (talk) 18:46, 25 March 2016 (UTC)
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Ok so since this is a stub, you might want to put a note in the talk page but I honestly doubt that anyone is going to care that much if you expand it but might be worth it just in case. Things that could use wikilinks are: the pages for the other organisms if there are any, the oceans, and the museum where they are deposited. Looks like the original article has them but they just didn't copy over.
You might need to add more citations to the second reproduction paragraph, people might wonder where you got some of your information.
In citations, there is a warning for page not found on the last of the links
Lmk when you add more content, I'd be happy to take another look.