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Good expansion of the existing article. Were you able to find any sources saying what caused her to lose her eyesight for three years? Good information about her career. Did she happen to ever publish books or journals of her work? If so, you could include those for references to her works. Overall, good first draft.MakaylaFoster (talk) 22:00, 11 November 2017 (UTC)