User talk:Overripe Pear

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:37, 26 January 2018 (UTC)

Peer reviewing answer

Hi Overripe Pear!
Thank you for your feedback!
Here are some answers to your suggestions:
- the first sentence of the section "History": I have moved this sentence, as you were right, it makes more sense in the "Calculations" section;
- removing the descriptive word "remarkable": totally biased as you mentioned so I have removed it;
- third sentence might be better if it were included in a larger paragraph about drafting ecological debt studies or the scales of these studies: I was not really sure whether or not I would keep this sentence actually. The source was pretty weak. So I rephrased the whole sentence.
Thanks a lot!
MynMada (talk) 19:30, 22 February 2018 (UTC)