User talk:Oscargrillo

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Thanks! I just made changes based on my marketing knowledge and removed what in the previous version was unverified or biased. I am nee to wikipedia, is there anything in my article that doesnt sound ok? Oscargrillo (talk) 05:17, 3 December 2018 (UTC)

Hi Oscargrillo and welcome to Wikipedia. I hope you enjoy editing Wikipedia so far. By the way, if you want to reach me in the future you should ping me (see Template:Reply to) and I will get a notification. Moving on, yes you removed some uncited content but you also removed some cited content such as the entire controversy section without leaving an appropriate WP:Edit summary. Just because something happened a while ago doesn't mean it has to get replaced or completely removed. As well, I noticed you say you used your marketing knowledge to replace the information. While we absolutely love people who are knowledgeable in their field, everything must be sourced per WP:RS and WP:V and original research, such as personal knowledge, is not an acceptable forms of knowledge on Wikipedia. I suggest you read the links above and maybe try Wikipedia Adventure. You also may be interested in joining a Wikiproject, like Wikipedia:WikiProject Media or Wikipedia:WikiProject Journalism. WikiProject Media is a group of editors whose focus is on improving Wikipedia pages related to print and electronic forms of media. There are many other Wikipedia projects out there, I am part of Wikipedia:WikiProject Ice Hockey, but per your background in marketing, you may find the previous two I listed interesting. I really hope this helps and you stay editing Wikipedia for a long time. If you have more questions, do not be afraid to ask here, at the WP:Teahouse, or the WP:Help desk. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 00:06, 4 December 2018 (UTC)