User talk:OKtamu/Millipede Memory
Proposed Edits
[edit]The overall article needs a bit of reorganization; a great deal of the information is usable but could be better placed. For reference, I will be using the HDMI article page, which is classified as a good article. Specific edits will likely include adding a history heading and rearranging the already present information to reflect the general construction of a standard technology page on Wikipedia.
As far as writing goes, some of the technical language is a bit complex for the average layman. Going again by the HDMI page, I will be trying to simplify the language without losing the content. My goal is to make the page a bit easier to read for non-experts. OKtamu (talk) 16:03, 25 February 2020 (UTC)