User talk:OKtamu/Alice Article

Proposed Edits

The overall article has some good information, but it could benefit from some reorganization. When compared with other articles in the Wikipedia medical portal, the Alice in Wonderland Syndrome article doesn't appear to have some key subcategories. For reference, I plan to use the Asperger Syndrome article, as it is in a similar category and a featured article.

As far as writing is concerned, the article has some good information, but the tone sometimes strays a bit from the Wikipedia standard for medical pages. As the article's warning tags note, the tone is a bit nebulous in a few areas. Again, for this purpose, I will be referencing the Asperger Syndrome page for appropriate tone and style. OKtamu (talk) 16:02, 25 February 2020 (UTC)