User talk:Nswadhwa/sandbox

Great job- Good detail on Wallingford, CT case and the order is very clear. Add a source at the end of your last paragraph (see google doc). Add a date for the "immediate outcry" after the case. Since you have some clear things that you could link onto other Wiki pages, think about adding links to Chbosky and "Pocket Books." The google doc with edits is shared with you. Sarahtrissel (talk) 18:31, 21 November 2016 (UTC)sarahtrissel[reply]

It looks great overall the case was a great highlight. There was very little biased language and there was a good variation of sources cited. However there were small instances of biased (see google doc). Also make sure to include some citations for the additions to the introduction section especially when claiming that some characters are shaped from his own memories. Mizraimbelman (talk) 16:56, 28 November 2016 (UTC)MizraimBelman[reply]