User talk:Noodlescradle
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[edit]Hello, Noodlescradle, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:21, 14 September 2021 (UTC)
Peer Review
[edit]1. I really liked how you managed to keep the tone of the article neutral. You did a really good job condensing information, while still making the article easy to read. You also did a great job of clarifying that any opinions mentioned in your article were quoted and the opinions of Ida herself.
2. It sounds like certain sections of this article were copy-pasted from sources (Ex: which creates transgressive placemaking experiences). I believe this sentence does not sound very neutral, and seems kind of out of place with the rest of the article. Maybe a more descriptive term would make this sound less biased/opinionated.
3. When I was reading through the article, it was difficult for me to understand what Wanderlust Projects was. It seemed like a project or program of some kind, but more information on what that was in your article would be great.
4. I think the way that you managed to keep sentences short and precise was very impressive. The wording of your article was very good and I will definitely try to implement this into my own article.
Statstudent38 (talk) 23:49, 28 November 2021 (UTC)
December 2021
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Hi Noodlescradle! I noticed that you recently marked an edit as minor at Jeff Bezanson (programmer) that may not have been. "Minor edit" has a very specific definition on Wikipedia – it refers only to superficial edits that could never be the subject of a dispute, such as typo corrections or reverting obvious vandalism. Any edit that changes the meaning of an article is not a minor edit, even if it only concerns a single word. Please see Help:Minor edit for more information. Thank you. Kj cheetham (talk) 14:14, 11 December 2021 (UTC)