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Your submission at Articles for creation: Automatic Load Shifting (November 11)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Qcne was:

This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Potentially something here for an article but the way you have written it is all wrong: this is an emotive essay. Please find sources FIRST and then simply paraphrase them in your own words in a neutral way.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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qcne (talk) 09:08, 11 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

OK, I will try to change. Though the contribution was not subjective. I will add more sources, and try to see how to write more encyclopedic. Give me a day though. Nonnen (talk) 10:14, 11 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Nonnen you have six months before drafts are deleted for inactivity - so no rush. qcne (talk) 10:27, 11 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Nonnen! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! qcne (talk) 09:08, 11 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]