User talk:Nock526

Welcome!

Welcome to Wikipedia, Nock526! I am The ed17 and have been editing Wikipedia for quite some time. I just wanted to say hi and welcome you to Wikipedia! If you have any questions, feel free to leave me a message on my talk page or by typing {{helpme}} at the bottom of this page. I love to help new users, so don't be afraid to leave a message! I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are some pages that you might find helpful:

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—Ed (talk • majestic titan) 05:09, 11 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Harich

Hello Nock! I hope that you have enjoyed writing here (and if you didn't, I also understand that)! :-) Here are a few comments for you:

Like a normal history paper, you have to format your in-line citations; bare links don't suffice. I would recommend using {{cite book}} or doing it manually using the MLA or Chicago styles.
Make sure that everything but the introduction has in-line citations; for example, where did you get the information in the "life" section?
Your writing appears to be quite good!
Otherwise it looks good, assuming that the article is complete, ie nothing is missing; I'm not in a position to judge that. Thanks for your contributions, and I hope you stick around after your project is over! —Ed (talk • majestic titan) 04:57, 15 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]