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Welcome!

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Again, welcome! bobrayner (talk) 16:43, 18 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Welcome students from Nanjing Normal University

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1, Hello. Are you a student at Nanjing Normal University? If you are I want to say hello.

2, My name is Anna. I live in Haikou, Hainan. I come from Canada.

3, I can help you if you need.

4, Don't worry. Be brave. You can write. No problem.


Some good things to help you:

1, Look at other articles. See how they organize it. Copy the style.
2, Use the information you get for your article, and write it in your words.
3, Don't use baike. It is not professionally written.
4, Put this at the end of the sentences or paragraphs to show where the information comes from:
<ref>example-website.com</ref>
5, Put this at the bottom of your article:
==References==
{{reflist}}

You can write to me here: Send me a message

Anna Frodesiak (talk) 17:24, 18 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

About Like a Speeding Youth pinyin and ISBN

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Hi Nnu-12-22100538, and again welcome to the English language Wikipedia! Could you possibly add the pinyin and ISBN for that book? I haven't been able to find either of them. Cheers! --Shirt58 (talk) 14:55, 19 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]


HAPPY HELP

Anna Frodesiak (talk) 02:59, 21 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]


Use Spaces
Spaces usually come after punctuation marks.
Instead of this:
  • I like bunnies(rabbits).They are not only cute,but friendly too.
Try this:
  • I like bunnies (rabbits). They are not only cute, but friendly too.

Anna Frodesiak (talk) 04:22, 21 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]


Protect Your Article
1. Putting lots and lots of references into your article protects it from being deleted.
2. Put references in your article like this example:
Rabbits are cute.<ref>http://www.about-rabbits.com</ref>
3. Add this to the bottom of the article:
==References==
{{reflist}}
4. Don't use Baidu.baike, Hudong, Tianya and sites that are not professionally written.
5. Write in your own words. Just the facts. Don't copy and paste.
6. Make your article style like other articles.

Anna Frodesiak (talk) 11:42, 21 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]


Link

Link to your article when you communicate. Like this:

Come and see my new article. It's called [[Dumpling]].

Anna Frodesiak (talk) 04:20, 22 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Like a Speeding Youth

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Dear Student, thanks for writing Like a Speeding Youth. As you can see there are many tempated warnings at the top. Don't let it discourage you and do what has to be done. Some suggestions from my side:

  • make links (this is a link to a flower
  • Make sections
  • make references (not baidu etc!), to reliable sources (read here what that is WP:RS)
  • Don't write your personal opinion but stick to the plain facts. This (t's unbelievable but true meaningful and deep.) should absolutely go.

new section here

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this is how you make it (just press edit to see how I did it) Questions? let me know on my talk page! If you have further improved it, let me know as well, and I will review again... L.tak (talk) 20:51, 1 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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File Copyright problem
File Copyright problem

Thanks for uploading File:Xiangshaonianlafeichi.jpg. However, it currently is missing information on its copyright status and its source. Wikipedia takes copyright very seriously.

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File Copyright problem
File Copyright problem

Thanks for uploading File:Hanhan' photo.jpg. However, it currently is missing information on its copyright status and its source. Wikipedia takes copyright very seriously.

If you did not create this work entirely yourself, you will need to specify the owner of the copyright. If you obtained it from a website, please add a link to the page from which it was taken, together with a brief restatement of the website's terms of use of its content. If the original copyright holder is a party unaffiliated with the website, that author should also be credited. You will also need to state under what licensing terms it was released. Please refer to the image use policy to learn what files you can or cannot upload on Wikipedia. The page on copyright tags may help you to find the correct tag to use for your file.

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Please also check any other files you may have uploaded to make sure they are correctly tagged. Here is a list of your uploads. If you have any questions please ask them at the Media copyright questions page. Thank you. Eeekster (talk) 08:48, 16 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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File Copyright problem
File Copyright problem

Thanks for uploading File:Hanhan.jpg. However, it currently is missing information on its copyright status and its source. Wikipedia takes copyright very seriously.

If you did not create this work entirely yourself, you will need to specify the owner of the copyright. If you obtained it from a website, please add a link to the page from which it was taken, together with a brief restatement of the website's terms of use of its content. If the original copyright holder is a party unaffiliated with the website, that author should also be credited. You will also need to state under what licensing terms it was released. Please refer to the image use policy to learn what files you can or cannot upload on Wikipedia. The page on copyright tags may help you to find the correct tag to use for your file.

Please add this information by editing the image description page. If the necessary information is not added within the next days, the image will be deleted. If the file is already gone, you can still make a request for undeletion and ask for a chance to fix the problem.

Please also check any other files you may have uploaded to make sure they are correctly tagged. Here is a list of your uploads. If you have any questions please ask them at the Media copyright questions page. Thank you. Eeekster (talk) 08:48, 16 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Like a Speeding Youth

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Hello. Here is some advice and comments:

You uploaded these pictures, but did not say where you got them from:

Did you get them from the internet?

There is a pink box on this page entitled "Use Spaces". Please read it and then look at your article. Also, as you have read many, many English education books, etc., I'm sure you know that the punctuation in a sentence like this is incorrect:

".They writed books for famous authors and then published in their names.The protagonist and Lao Qiang were poor,besides writing ,they had nothing to do but idle away.They could enjoy a short luxury life as long as they got payments from some underground editors."

After you address those issues, we can look into other matters. I will watch the article to see how you progress. Good luck, Anna Frodesiak (talk) 13:43, 16 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I don't think you understand. You just changed the wording. As I said above, the problem is with the punctuation and spacing. Please, again, and again, read the pink box entitled "Use Spaces". Anna Frodesiak (talk) 18:21, 16 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]


Message

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You have new message/s Hello. You have a new message at Anna Frodesiak's talk page. 22:22, 17 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Proposed deletion of An Untouched Paradise Shaxi

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The article An Untouched Paradise Shaxi has been proposed for deletion because of the following concern:

POV Original research, two articles with name "Shaxi" already exist, likely a duplicate of one of them. No context, no sources.

While all contributions to Wikipedia are appreciated, content or articles may be deleted for any of several reasons.

You may prevent the proposed deletion by removing the {{proposed deletion/dated}} notice, but please explain why in your edit summary or on the article's talk page.

Please consider improving the article to address the issues raised. Removing {{proposed deletion/dated}} will stop the proposed deletion process, but other deletion processes exist. In particular, the speedy deletion process can result in deletion without discussion, and articles for deletion allows discussion to reach consensus for deletion. Gaijin42 (talk) 15:14, 27 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Nomination of An Untouched Paradise Shaxi for deletion

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A discussion is taking place as to whether the article An Untouched Paradise Shaxi is suitable for inclusion in Wikipedia according to Wikipedia's policies and guidelines or whether it should be deleted.

The article will be discussed at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/An Untouched Paradise Shaxi until a consensus is reached, and anyone is welcome to contribute to the discussion. The nomination will explain the policies and guidelines which are of concern. The discussion focuses on good quality evidence, and our policies and guidelines.

Users may edit the article during the discussion, including to improve the article to address concerns raised in the discussion. However, do not remove the article-for-deletion template from the top of the article. Gaijin42 (talk) 15:05, 1 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Your article has been moved to AfC space

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Hi! I would like to inform you that the Articles for Creation submission which was previously located here: User:Nnu-12-22100538/Jincanghu has been moved to Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Jincanghu, this move was made automatically and doesn't affect your article, if you have any questions please ask on my talk page! Have a nice day. ArticlesForCreationBot (talk) 05:08, 24 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation

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You recently made a submission to Articles for Creation. Your article has been reviewed and because some issues were found, it could not be accepted in its current form; it is now located at Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Jincanghu. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. Feel free to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved. (You can do this by adding the text {{subst:AFC submission/submit}} to the top of the article.) Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! ArtByJude (talk) 11:03, 24 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Jincanghu

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Your reference for http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Jincanghu is http://baike.baidu.com/view/3526688.htm#1

Can you find more and better references? Anna Frodesiak (talk) 11:31, 24 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation

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Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Hallows AG (talk) 09:59, 12 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]
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Like a Speeding Youth

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Hello there. Nice work. I'm looking into it now.

Han Han's photo

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First, I must ask about this photo. It appears to be professional. Where did you find it?

Book cover images

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These images [1][2] must be uploaded again here. Fill in the form like in this example. For the "Licensing:", select "book cover" 

== Summary ==
{{Non-free use rationale
 |Article           = The Big Book Of Bunnies
 |Description       = 1st edition
 |Source            = http://www.bookseller.co.uk/The Big Book Of Bunnies
 |Portion           = 1st edition
 |Low_resolution    = yes
 |Purpose           = to illustrate an article concerning the book in question
 |Replaceability    = no
 |other_information = 
}}

Article content

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It looks good. It needs some cleanup, but otherwise, you've done a great job! Anna Frodesiak (talk) 10:54, 21 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Hello again. I looked at the content. I would really suggest removing all "opinions" unless they are really well sourced. There is also a lot of content that I don't really understand. Please give it a good read and see what you can do. Best, Anna Frodesiak (talk) 11:14, 21 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Your recent edits

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Like a Speeding Youth

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Hello, Nnu-12-22100538, and thank you for all your hard work on Like a Speeding Youth. I notice that you are editing it now – sorry if I've been changing it at the same time as you have. I looked back at the state of the article when all those tags were inserted at the top, and I don't think those tags apply any more, so I've removed them. I won't make any more changes at present, since you are currently working on the article. Best wishes, Hebrides (talk) 08:27, 25 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Neutrality

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It is very important not to make boastful statements when writing about a subject. If you use meaningless, promotional terms then the article can seem like spam and get deleted. This is why we should not have boasting about which school is better than another school or pointless comments about how proud people are.

Anyway, here are some things you can do to help with Taicang senior high school:

  • The "spirit" section does not make any sense to a Westerner like me. You need to explain what it means before you list the items. Maybe you can copy this from an existing article about another school. It does not need to be a big explanation, just enough to let people know what "spirit" means.
  • Try to explain what is meant by "focus of high schools". This is not clear. Is "focus" the right word?
  • You mention it being a 4 star school but it is not clear what that means. Every country has a different way of grading schools so it is important to link to an explanation of these stars ratings so that readers can find out who awards the stars and what they mean. I assume 4 stars is good, but is it 4 out of 4, 4 out of 5 or something else?

--DanielRigal (talk) 13:15, 25 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Jincang Lake, Taicang

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Thanks for creating the Jincang Lake, Taicang article – an interesting read, and a nicely constructed article. I just made a number of really small edits to the page, but I thought I would leave a message for you, to explain my reasons for a few of the changes:

  • I removed "new" from the first paragraph and stated "2008" because this article may still be here in 2050...
  • I moved images to the right and to the start of the section and removed the multiple blank lines: putting blank lines in might make everything look nice on your "browser + screen resolution + text size + browser window size", but people view Wikipedia on lots of different devices. It's better just to let the material flow onto whatever the reader is using.
  • Dates appeared twice in the "Events" table – I removed duplicates.

My other changes were, I think, straighforward. Feel free to change anything that I have done that you don't like. Best wishes — Hebrides (talk) 21:14, 30 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Jincanghu concern

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Your draft article, Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Jincanghu

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ArbCom elections are now open!

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