User talk:Nmucci
This user is a student editor in College_of_DuPage/English_1102,_section_77_(Spring_2018) . |
Nmucci, you are invited to the Teahouse!
[edit]Hi Nmucci! Thanks for contributing to Wikipedia. We hope to see you there!
Delivered by HostBot on behalf of the Teahouse hosts 16:04, 7 April 2018 (UTC) |
I suggest finding evidence for this sentence "Paths refers to the paths between nodes or areas that victims and offenders frequent, crime is frequently linked to flows of people among paths such as commuter times, establishment's closing times, and school being out for the day." so that it makes it more reliable.
Your information flows very well. You're paragraph for reducing opportunities and prevention needs more detail but other wise it looked like a good start!