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Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (January 11)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Liance was:
Thank you for your submission, but the subject of this article already exists in Wikipedia. You can find it and improve it at Jarrod Moses instead.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
-Liancetalk/contribs 22:55, 11 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]


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Speedy deletion nomination of Jarrod Moses

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A tag has been placed on Jarrod Moses, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, product, group, service or person and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Organizations for more information.

If you think this page should not be deleted for this reason, you may contest the nomination by visiting the page and clicking the button labelled "Contest this speedy deletion". This will give you the opportunity to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. However, be aware that once a page is tagged for speedy deletion, it may be removed without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag from the page yourself, but do not hesitate to add information in line with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. If the page is deleted, and you wish to retrieve the deleted material for future reference or improvement, then please contact the deleting administrator. Nat Gertler (talk) 23:07, 11 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Taking a look at your edit history, it looks like you didn't intend to create this as a "live" article, but meant to submit it to Articles For Creation. As such, I've stopped the deletion, and moved the article to User:Nisdaner/sandbox/Jarrod Moses, where you can work on it further. Having looked at the article, it's not ready for release yet - it's full of boastful statements, which are not properly sourced. We avoid statements that suggest a point of view, and even simple factual information that would appear boastful needs what we'd consider a "[[WP:RS|reliable source" - a respectable third-party source, which generally doesn't include the company that the subject is president of. So the company's website would not serve to say, for example, that the company is on the cutting edge (that's pure point of view; at best, we'd say that such-and-such magazine said the company was on the cutting edge) or that the subject won an Emmy (although the Emmy website would be a fine source for that.) Let me know if you have any questions. --Nat Gertler (talk) 23:30, 11 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jarrod Moses (January 12)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:
This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
Robert McClenon (talk) 16:23, 12 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jarrod Moses (January 12)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:
The author may have meant to create a new version of the article omitting the peacock language, but instead has duplicated much of the article. I suggest that the author request assistance or advice at the Teahouse if they are having difficulty.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
Robert McClenon (talk) 20:51, 12 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jarrod Moses (January 12)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:
Stop continuing to add new sections to this draft, and remove the peacock language instead. If you don't understand, ask for help.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
Robert McClenon (talk) 21:02, 12 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

January 2016

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Information icon Greetings. At least one of your recent edits, such as the edit you made to Draft:Jarrod Moses, did not appear to be constructive. Although everyone is welcome to contribute to Wikipedia, please take some time to familiarise yourself with our policies and guidelines. You can find information about these at our welcome page which also provides further information about contributing constructively to this encyclopedia. If you only meant to make some test edits, please use the sandbox for that. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you may leave a message on my talk page. Please stop resubmitting this draft until you ask for help. You may be trying to clean up the draft but are making it worse. Robert McClenon (talk) 21:03, 12 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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Hello, Nisdaner! Welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. You may benefit from following some of the links below, which will help you get the most out of Wikipedia. If you have any questions you can ask me on my talk page, or place {{helpme}} on your talk page and ask your question there. Please remember to sign your name on talk pages by clicking or by typing four tildes "~~~~"; this will automatically produce your name and the date. If you are already excited about Wikipedia, you might want to consider being "adopted" by a more experienced editor or joining a WikiProject to collaborate with others in creating and improving articles of your interest. Click here for a directory of all the WikiProjects. Finally, please do your best to always fill in the edit summary field when making edits to pages. Happy editing! Robert McClenon (talk) 21:05, 12 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]
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Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:Jarrod Moses

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A tag has been placed on Draft:Jarrod Moses, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, product, group, service or person and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Organizations for more information.

If you think this page should not be deleted for this reason, you may contest the nomination by visiting the page and clicking the button labelled "Contest this speedy deletion". This will give you the opportunity to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. However, be aware that once a page is tagged for speedy deletion, it may be removed without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag from the page yourself, but do not hesitate to add information in line with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. If the page is deleted, and you wish to retrieve the deleted material for future reference or improvement, then please contact the deleting administrator. Joseph2302 (talk) 22:50, 12 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Teahouse talkback: you've got messages!

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Hello, Nisdaner. Your question has been answered at the Teahouse Q&A board. Feel free to reply there!
Please note that all old questions are archived after 2-3 days of inactivity. Message added by — Vchimpanzee • talk • contributions • 23:19, 15 January 2016 (UTC). (You can remove this notice at any time by removing the {{teahouse talkback}} template).[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jarrod Moses (August 10)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Huon was:
This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of people and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.
 The comment the reviewer left was:
The NYT interview is the best of the references, but an interview is Moses talking about himself, not independent coverage of him. The others are completely useless for purposes of notability.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
Huon (talk) 19:43, 10 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Jarrod Moses is the Founder, Chief Executive Officer, and President of United Entertainment Group. 

Moses's career began in 1991 working for Grey Advertising While at Grey he became the youngest President & CEO in Grey Advertising history. He stayed with the company for 16 years until its eventual sale, which he was part of, to WPP Group in 2007. [1]Soon after the sale, Moses founded United Entertainment Group (UEG) as a joint venture with Hollywood’s United Talent Agency. UEG has developed campaigns for marketers such as Procter & Gamble, Frito- Lay, General Mills, AT&T, Diageo, and Starbucks. They also have worked with entertainment companies such as Time Warner, Comcast, MTV Networks, Facebook, and Google as well as directly with talent including Mark Wahlberg Rihanna, Queen Latifah, Pharrell, Katie Perry, Drew Barrymore, Ellen Degeneres, and Jimmy Kimmel. [2] [3]


Moses and his UEG team have been responsible for creating over 200 television programs, motion picture partnerships, concert tours, endorsement deals, product placements and celebrity partnerships. Moses has earned many industry accolades including Emmys, Platinum Records, Cannes Lions, and Effies. He has been featured in The New York Times, Variety, Hollywood Reporter, AdAge, and on NBC’s The Apprentice, CNN, ABC, Bloomberg TV and Radio, Fox Business News, and other various international publications.[4]

In addition to his career, Moses has been an adjunct professor of marketing at Columbia University Business School since January 2012. [5] [6] He also is a member of the Board of the Hamptons International Film Festival, and a co-founder of the New York Comedy Festival.

References

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  1. ^ http://adage.com/article/madisonvine-news/moses-lead-brands-land-content/120356/. {{cite web}}: Missing or empty |title= (help)
  2. ^ [*http://www.nytimes.com/2012/09/16/business/jarrod-moses-of-united-entertainment-on-team-trust.html *http://www.nytimes.com/2012/09/16/business/jarrod-moses-of-united-entertainment-on-team-trust.html]. {{cite web}}: Check |url= value (help); Missing or empty |title= (help)
  3. ^ "Brand Me, Baby!". Broadcasting & Cable.
  4. ^ http://www.imdb.com/name/nm1490954/. {{cite web}}: Missing or empty |title= (help)
  5. ^ http://www.hartford.edu/hillyer/alumni/alumpro_moses.aspx. {{cite web}}: Missing or empty |title= (help)
  6. ^ http://www8.gsb.columbia.edu/cbs-directory/detail/jm4003. {{cite web}}: Missing or empty |title= (help)

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (August 15)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:
This submission provides insufficient context for those unfamiliar with the subject matter. Please see the guide to writing better articles for information on how to better format your submission.
 The comment the reviewer left was:
It isn't clear from this draft what the name of its subject is. Is it Jarrod Moses? If so, use his full name in the lede sentence, and then his surname.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
Robert McClenon (talk) 16:44, 15 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (August 17)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:
This appears to be a duplicate of another submission, Jarrod Moses, which is also waiting to be reviewed. To save time we will consider the other submission and not this one.
 The comment the reviewer left was:
Please do not create multiple copies of drafts. The references are inconsistently formatted.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
Robert McClenon (talk) 02:20, 17 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Jarrod Moses is the Founder, Chief Executive Officer, and President of United Entertainment Group. 

Moses's career began in 1991 working for Grey Advertising While at Grey he became the youngest President & CEO in Grey Advertising history. He stayed with the company for 16 years until its eventual sale, which he was part of, to WPP Group in 2007. [1]Soon after the sale, Moses founded United Entertainment Group (UEG) as a joint venture with Hollywood’s United Talent Agency. UEG has developed campaigns for marketers such as Procter & Gamble, Frito- Lay, General Mills, AT&T, Diageo, and Starbucks. They also have worked with entertainment companies such as Time Warner, Comcast, MTV Networks, Facebook, and Google as well as directly with talent including Mark Wahlberg Rihanna, Queen Latifah, Pharrell, Katie Perry, Drew Barrymore, Ellen Degeneres, and Jimmy Kimmel. [2] [3]


Moses and his UEG team have been responsible for creating over 200 television programs, motion picture partnerships, concert tours, endorsement deals, product placements and celebrity partnerships. Moses has earned many industry accolades including Emmys, Platinum Records, Cannes Lions, and Effies. He has been featured in The New York Times, Variety, Hollywood Reporter, AdAge, and on NBC’s The Apprentice, CNN, ABC, Bloomberg TV and Radio, Fox Business News, and other various international publications.[4]

In addition to his career, Moses has been an adjunct professor of marketing at Columbia University Business School since January 2012. [5] [6] He also is a member of the Board of the Hamptons International Film Festival, and a co-founder of the New York Comedy Festival.

References

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  1. ^ http://adage.com/article/madisonvine-news/moses-lead-brands-land-content/120356/. {{cite web}}: Missing or empty |title= (help)
  2. ^ [*http://www.nytimes.com/2012/09/16/business/jarrod-moses-of-united-entertainment-on-team-trust.html *http://www.nytimes.com/2012/09/16/business/jarrod-moses-of-united-entertainment-on-team-trust.html]. {{cite web}}: Check |url= value (help); Missing or empty |title= (help)
  3. ^ "Brand Me, Baby!". Broadcasting & Cable.
  4. ^ http://www.imdb.com/name/nm1490954/. {{cite web}}: Missing or empty |title= (help)
  5. ^ http://www.hartford.edu/hillyer/alumni/alumpro_moses.aspx. {{cite web}}: Missing or empty |title= (help)
  6. ^ http://www8.gsb.columbia.edu/cbs-directory/detail/jm4003. {{cite web}}: Missing or empty |title= (help)

Teahouse talkback: you've got messages!

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Hello, Nisdaner. Your question has been answered at the Teahouse Q&A board. Feel free to reply there!
Please note that all old questions are archived after 2-3 days of inactivity. Message added by — Vchimpanzee • talk • contributions • 21:20, 29 August 2016 (UTC). (You can remove this notice at any time by removing the {{teahouse talkback}} template).[reply]

Jarrod Moses - Two Questions

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I have two questions. First, do you want the draft in your sandbox reviewed? If so, do you want the version at Draft: Jarrod Moses deleted to make way for the sandbox version? Second, do you have a connection to Jarrod Moses? If so, please declare it via the conflict of interest policy. In any case, I would invite you also to consider other ways that you can help Wikipedia, such as by editing existing articles. Robert McClenon (talk) 17:56, 12 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: User:Nisdaner/sandbox has a new comment

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I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at User:Nisdaner/sandbox. Thanks! Robert McClenon (talk) 19:03, 13 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (September 14)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:
This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of people and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.
 The comment the reviewer left was:
I would not resubmit as there's still nothing coming close for actually establishing both his own substance and independent notability; there's no inherited notability from other people or companies; there would have needed to be enough for his own convincing article.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
SwisterTwister talk 20:59, 14 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Jarrod Moses

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Hello, Nisdaner. It has been over six months since you last edited your Articles for Creation draft article submission, "Jarrod Moses".

In accordance with our policy that Articles for Creation is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}} or {{db-g13}} code.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. 1989 05:43, 22 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, User:Nisdaner/sandbox

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Hello, Nisdaner. It has been over six months since you last edited your Articles for Creation draft article submission, "sandbox".

In accordance with our policy that Articles for Creation is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}} or {{db-g13}} code.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. 1989 06:32, 22 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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