User talk:Neurotip/Neuropathy/Peripheral neuropathy
Impressions
[edit]Your proposed version is very good and a major improvement on the previous version. Intro sentence should include additional causes, something along the lines of "as well as certain drugs, chemotherapy and certain toxic chemicals".
So the causes needs expanded in the intro. Alcohol is a well known cause of peripheral neuropathy for example, corticosteroids (I think as well?), certain antibiotics and other drugs, for example.
I would encourage you to do a bold update to the article as soon as possible. You can always add additional improvements directly into the article. Thank you for your work.--Literaturegeek | T@1k? 18:00, 14 November 2009 (UTC)