User talk:NatalieMoun/meiji era

Nice work! This looks great. Your stances are neutral.

Maybe include a citation after the explanation of sulfuric acid? Or hyperlink to another Wikipedia page?

Mialejeune (talk) 21:58, 16 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Looks very interesting! I feel the information was present in a neutral fashion. It is a great start and look forward to the completed assignment. Rhodgk2 (talk) 22:01, 16 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your sandbox draft definitely adds to the existing article & avoids duplicating information. I think that your work adds to the existing article nicely. It is very neutral & has just straight facts. IBalart (talk) 21:56, 30 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Nice work again. Keep developing the environmental activism section, but other wise good work.

You've done a nice job to develop coherent narrative sections. I think you may want to have an overarching intro that outlines some of the key environmental challenges of the Meiji area, then dive into you subsections. THe other key issue is where to place this material. While you have been working with the Meiji page, I think it might make more sense to add to 'Environmental Issues in Japan' under the 'Past issues' section. What do you think? You can proceed either way, but do consider my alternative (or others). It's a matter of finding the best fit for your research. Brendankarch (talk) 17:44, 31 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]