User talk:Naomil07/War on women

Peer Review

Overall, I think your article is well-developed and clear. You are adding important content to the existing article, and I think your paragraphs will really help strengthen the existing sections. You also do a great job integrating statistics in the public opinion section. I appreciate that you don’t just summarize some of these studies, but actually share the percentage increases and explain why that might have occurred. Like I mentioned in the comments, the mention of modern sexism and how that has impacted the “war on women” rhetoric is very interesting and something I’ve never thought about. I do think that there is room to draw a stronger connection to the war on women topic in the second half of that paragraph. Because a neo-sexism wiki article already exists, I think you could spend more time focusing on how modern sexism relates to the war on women than its impact on voting behavior. Additionally, looking at the original article, I think there’s also an opportunity to add more to the political campaigns section. I think the “war on women” rhetoric has been used a lot outside of just presidential campaign, especially after and surrounding the Dobbs decision. I think this would also allow you to bring in a diverse set of sources! Gpol643 (talk) 20:54, 31 March 2023 (UTC)