User talk:N mancia20/sandbox
Demographics Draft:
The South End has a population to be an estimate of about 30,804, with about 16,107 being male and 14,697 being female. [1]. As of 2010, it is made up of 49.5% white, 17.1% African American, 16.6% Hispanic/Latino, and Asian account for about 13.9% of the total population [2] N mancia20 (talk) 02:19, 24 March 2015 (UTC)
Lede changes
[edit]Hi N mancia20, I made a few changes to your introduction (or "lede"). Overall it looks good and will be a clear improvement over the current one. :)
I would recommend editing the community resources section down a bit. We want to cover resources but also want to make sure the article covers things in proportion to their importance to the subject and to a reader who might want to know many different things about the subject. We don't need the street names of individual clinics or organizations. If those organizations get a wikipedia article the location could go there, but it isn't much help to a reader here. Likewise whether or not specific swimming classes are offered is something that is better left to a link to a community calendar. You can add one to the external links rather than listing them in text.
If you need a hand making these changes, please let me know. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:48, 7 April 2015 (UTC)
- ^ "American Community Survey". http://www.bostonredevelopmentauthority.org/getattachment/6078c23f-f034-4003-867d-a7e0e9a1c6f4.
{{cite web}}:|access-date=requires|url=(help); External link in|website=|url=(help) - ^ "South End 2010 Census Population". http://www.bostonredevelopmentauthority.org/getattachment/c06882cc-c3e5-4df9-82e3-a46cbd8d5b73.
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