User talk:Msm272/sandbox
testing Msm272 (talk) 16:48, 25 January 2017 (UTC)
In the lead section, I really like the information you collected and they are really interesting to read. However, I think you can maybe rearrange the order of your information, for example put more basic information of the language in the beginning. how many speakers exist in the world and where they are located currently, after these information is presented, you then can pull out more information of how it is related to other languages that are similar to it.
I also really like the sections for history of documentation, and culture. The information is very neutral and i think it does not need too much change there.