User talk:Mrothroc/Dihydrogen phosphate
I've peer-reviewed your article. Safrye8 (talk) 14:00, 4 March 2021 (UTC)
Peer-reviewed drafted changes. Looks good! I made a few suggestions. Gsloan18 (talk) 14:27, 4 March 2021 (UTC)
George's comments
[edit]I like the additional information. Pay attention to neutral tone and that you are stating facts. Don't say "can be used" if it is used that way and you have a source for it. Counterions are not "bound" in salts of dihydrogen phosphates it is ok to just refer to "the sodium salt" or "the potassium salt". Your structure section is incorrect - although the Lewis structure shown in the original page is the hypervalent one, it is possible to draw an octet rule structure that does not have a double bond and the original statement is correct, you can think of dihydrogen phosphate as [P(O)2(OH)2]- where both -O and -OH are equivalent. Change it or just leave the structure section as it was. --Drglheard (talk) 19:05, 12 March 2021 (UTC)