User talk:Mpfister5

May 2012

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The following is the log entry regarding this warning: Maverick Technologies was changed by Mpfister5 (u) (t) ANN scored at 0.963972 on 2012-05-18T21:07:52+00:00 . Thank you. ClueBot NG (talk) 21:07, 18 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry I was premature on that edit. I just published the MAVERICK Technologies page that it is supposed to redirect to. Thank you for your help, it is much appreciated. I am new at this! Mpfister5 (talk) 21:10, 18 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

File source and copyright licensing problem with File:Mav logo.JPG

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Comments

Just first thoughts, I'm going out shortly

The full capitalisation of Maverick looks very spammy. I checked three sources at random, and they only cap the first letter. Unless the company name is an acronym, like ICI, which seems unlikely, you should use normal capitalisation. You also overuse the company name, which looks spammy too

There is too much about what the company does, and little about the company itself, which again looks spammy. I only know where the company headquarters are because it's in the info box, not mentioned in the text. I don't what its declared profits are, just what it sells.

The use of words like "solutions, services, serves" is advertisement talk, they are products
Your refs would be more intelligible if instead of a bare url you used the format [url description], so your first ref would read St Louis Commerce magazine, August 2007
You list awards, has the company never received negative criticism? If so, that would give the article some much needed balance.

I'll look again later Jimfbleak - talk to me? 06:01, 19 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]