User talk:Mp4lyfe
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Mp4lyfe, you are invited to the Teahouse!
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Hi Mp4lyfe! Thanks for contributing to Wikipedia. We hope to see you there!
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Welcome!
[edit]Hello, Mp4lyfe, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:05, 2 October 2018 (UTC)
Welcome to The Wikipedia Adventure!
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- Hi Mp4lyfe! We're so happy you wanted to play to learn, as a friendly and fun way to get into our community and mission. I think these links might be helpful to you as you get started.
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Draft Review
[edit]Hi Mp4lyfe,
Your rough draft is looking really good so far. It's interesting to read, easy to navigate, and everything is put into terms that pretty much anyone can understand. I couldn't find any grammatical errors, so that is also a really good thing. Your references look legitimate and credible, and your links are also spot on. Nice work!
Critiques
[edit]Overall, your article is really well written, so there are only a few things I can find that could be made better. At the very beginning of your rough draft, you start a section without a heading. I'd recommend creating a heading titled "Introduction". Also, your references aren't in MLA format (only the website link itself is there) so you might want to look into changing that. If you can find more reasons on "Why the EU needs a space policy" that could be worth expanding as well. I do have some questions: Are there any people who have major roles in the space program? If so, who are they? Why was the program created in the first place?