User talk:Mollyemm0307
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[edit]Hello, Mollyemm0307, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:21, 29 November 2018 (UTC)
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[edit]Hi, here are my notes: The article needs more/better sourcing to help back up claims. You have links to basic websites that don't go to the specific page that's about Bleier, which is absolutely necessary for verification. I fixed one of these, but the others need to be fixed as well. Keep in mind that you can absolutely use sourcing in the existing version of the article. You can copy this over to your draft by opening both pages in edit mode, then copying and pasting the sources.
Other than that, a lot of the changes looked to be fairly subtle, or at least I didn't notice them all that easily. Something I can recommend, if you're interested, is that you may want to add a bibliography where you list Bleier's most notable works. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:49, 3 December 2018 (UTC)