User talk:Mofei Wu
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[edit]Hello, Mofei Wu, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Brianda and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Brianda (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:00, 4 October 2023 (UTC)
The Statue of Venus Obliterated by Infinity Nets feedback
[edit]Hi @Mofei Wu, Your draft on The Statue of Venus Obliterated was moved back to your sandbox for lack of citations to reliable sources and for still having draft elements (like formatting, draft headers) in the article. You have a good foundation for the article but need to add inline citations to reliable sources, in order to support the text.
The lack of inline citations makes it difficult for readers to verify factual statements in your article. Every statement should be followed by a supporting citation; if a group of sentences are all supported by the same source, you can place a single reference after all of them, but you need to have at least one reference per paragraph, and you shouldn't have any statements after the final reference in a paragraph. If you need a refresher on how to add citations, please consult this training module.
Also you have several paragraphs describing essays on the artist, not about the statue. If the information isn't relative to the statue, then I suggest you remove that text. You can, however, summarize any relevant information found within the sources if it improves the content of this article about the statue, making sure to have inline citations to the sources.
I suggest you address these concerns before attempting to move the page. Let me know if you have any questions about this feedback. Looping in @Nsayadi. Brianda (Wiki Ed) (talk) 22:12, 17 November 2023 (UTC)
- Hi, I'm Mofei, I read your comments but could not find my page in the sandbox, could you send me a link of it? Thanks. Mofei Wu (talk) 15:43, 12 December 2023 (UTC)
Concern regarding Draft:The Statue of Venus Obliterated by Infinity Nets (sculpture)
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Hello, Mofei Wu. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:The Statue of Venus Obliterated by Infinity Nets (sculpture), a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.
If the page has already been deleted, you can request it be undeleted so you can continue working on it.
Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 19:05, 17 April 2024 (UTC)
Your draft article, Draft:The Statue of Venus Obliterated by Infinity Nets (sculpture)
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Hello, Mofei Wu. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or draft page you started, "The Statue of Venus Obliterated by Infinity Nets".
In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material, the draft has been deleted. When you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.
Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz Read! Talk! 18:04, 16 May 2024 (UTC)