User talk:Mndo18/sandbox

Peer Review

Hi Mando18! It seems from your outline and sources that you provided that you are on your way to a great wiki submission! I agree with you that the article definitely is lacking in the areas that you mentioned. It would definitely benefit the article if you provided more fleshed out examples, especially if you provided them for other animals. I did notice that the "Solutions" section on the article was a little short. Have you thought about adding to this as well? It only seems to have one source cited as well. Good luck with your editing :) Michelle tapp (talk)

Rabia's peer review

I really like the topic you have chosen to expand on, very neat. I think it would to see what you add about domestic dog behaviour. I would recommend also skimming through the domestic dog wiki page and seeing if you can find anything on that page written about stereotype. If so you could consider creating a link to that section in your own addition on this page. You have lot of references on this topic which is great. Good luck with your writing! — Preceding unsigned comment added by RabiaF (talk • contribs) 22:49, 23 October 2017 (UTC)