User talk:Miss Dai

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Introduction of Richard Kamler

Richard Kamler is a famous American artist and educator.

Your submission at Articles for creation: Deyunshe (June 1)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Zanhe were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Topic is notable but much of the article lacks sourcing, especially the "Members" section. Also, language like "brilliant career" and "clearly realized that cross-talk art must survive and develop and must return to the theater" is promotional and needs to be written in a neutral tone.

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Zanhe (talk) 05:02, 1 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Miss Dai! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Zanhe (talk) 05:02, 1 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Deyunshe has been accepted

Deyunshe, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.
The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

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Zanhe (talk) 19:41, 5 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]