User talk:Minhtrang 92/sandbox
Hi, This is for the feedback of the assignment.This is a really interesting topic and your group has a decent amount of references and pictures that makes the article logical and easy to understand. One suggestion is to talk more about the future directions of Carbon Looping in carbon capture and storage and compare with the current technology. Explain potentially what will be improved in the future.
Thank you!
Ziqiang Hong
Nice job on the Ca looping article. I suggest you remake the figure in power point or word, making a minor change or two and changing the font, so that you don't need to get permission from the source article. -Dr. Went Mswent (talk) 04:57, 3 May 2016 (UTC)
Great article, very thorough. My main feedback is to fix some formatting issues:
- some of your sections are very long so you might want to consider using sub-section headings, e.g. make "sintering" a subsection under "technical implications"
- your in-text citations aren't in the Wikipedia format
- some of your numbers are missing a space between the number and unit, which can make it confusing to read
- also, some of your statements don't appear to have sources (e.g. that limestone accounts for 10% of all sedimentary rock) so maybe double-check to make sure all of your statements are cited